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Friday, 27 July 2018

Reading alternate ending Benny

Reading alternate ending Benny
This is my alternate ending to my reading could Benny.

In the alternate ending it would be better for Benny and his friend to see each other again.
It would be better if they went to each other school and saw each other everyday.
It would have been a better friendship if Benny didn't push his friend off.

Benny tried to be a hero but his friend had to do it all for him.

1 comment:

  1. Hi Austin,
    Can you reformat your work so that it is not running off the page! I would love to read all of your alternate ending.

    - Miss Birtch

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