Adverbs to start sentence with:
Quickly, curiously, Importantly, Firstly, Often, Remarkably, Similarly, Significantly, Surprisingly, Readily
Importantly, I get to class on time everyday.
Surprisingly, I got to school on time.
Beginning with a preposition:
Against, Before, Between, Over, Behind, Within, Under, Below, At, For, Throughout, Near, About
Near the beach, I saw a great white shark.
Under the coach, I finally found the remote.
P - Point - State the point that you want to make - Firstly in the book abomination, Martha was bullied at school
E - Evidence - Support your point with 2 - 3 sentences - An example of this is the incident with the girls throwing water over the toilet stall onto Martha. When she came out of the stall they punched her in the stomach and called her a slut, This made Martha feel angry and upset.
E - Explain - Link my evidence to my point - 2 sentences - Unsurprisingly, this is an example of physical bullying by students toward Martha. There was an unbalance of power between Martha and her bullies because there was one of her and three of them
L - Link - Link back to your argument - Link to the next paragraph - Another way Martha experiences suffering is at the hands of her parents and the church of the Righteous.
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