Hi Austin, I attend St Pius X school , I like how you play soccer because I play soccer too, Next time you can put more detail and add ideas to your story , I enjoyed reading your story about soccer. Keep up your work!!!
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows: 1. Something positive - something you like about what I have shared. 2. Something helpful - add more info or ask me a question. 3. Something thoughtful - how have you connected with my learning?
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Great shot Austin. Well done on completing this activity.
ReplyDeleteThank you miss McLeod for the advice
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ReplyDeleteHi Austin my name is christian you are good well done
ReplyDeleteHi Austin my name is christian you are good well done
ReplyDeleteHi Austin,
ReplyDeleteI attend St Pius X school , I like how you play soccer because I play soccer too, Next time you can put more detail and add ideas to your story , I enjoyed reading your story about soccer.
Keep up your work!!!